Revise a presentation

Revise a presentation of your choice, taking into account the notes from the presentation and the TEDx Talk. Consider the following questions: What is the core message? What level of knowledge are you assuming? For whom are you preparing which content, for what purpose, and for which teaching material? Upload the revised version here and list your changes in bullet points.

Then take your Learning Journal and fill in pages 42, 44 and 46.